Blog #6 The Horse Racing Industry:Issues and Reforms

About this research paper, the topic is The Horse Racing Industry: Issues and Reform. We know that in the research paper, we have to use many references to support the topic and explain the it, so how to use these references are very important for us. There are also many ways to use the references, such as quotation and paraphrase. Because of these ways to use references in our research paper, our paper can become more and more knowledgeable.

In this paper, at the first paragraph, writer uses the quotation. The writer quotes a sportswriter and racing strategist's words. I think because at the beginning of the paper, writer needs some specialized opinions to make the paper more professional. And from the quotation, it gives a good metaphor for this topic. Even though some sports looks very gentility, they can be as cruel as cockfight. From this quotation, writer can make authors to think about the meaning of the horse racing and why some people support to ban it.

At the beginning of the second paragraph, writer uses the paraphrase. Writers use a article for the Time. Because at this part, the writer should explain about the structure of the horse and explain the harm for the horse, so the writer need some profession reference and use her own language to explain it. Because not every author can understand the specialized word. That makes every author can understand her paper easily.

Because of these ways that writer to use in the paper, it makes this paper more and more professional and more and more people can understand writer's opinions.